This is Choa Chu Kang park. This is the place where i would visit almost everyweek when i was young. It means alot to me as I always play with my childhood friends there. There was once i remembered where me and my neighbours went to the park and played in the sand play ground. When we were having a whale of a time, I suddenly got knocked down by a bicycle . I remembered the pain was excruciating, and I cried. But thanks to my friends, they supported me and brought me to my parents who were in the cafe nearby. They quickly helped me wash my wound. After that incident, I got myself a scar on my leg. That park left me with an unforgettable memory. When I grew up, I still go there frequently to play soccer with my primary school friends.
As I play soccer there almost every week, my soccer skills improved a lot and now I can play quite well. However, now i have no more time to visit that park anymore. However, when I go jogging around the neighborhood, I will always think of the good times I had in that park.
Wow, Damien, I did not know that you had such a wonderful place where you grow up. From the way you described everything that happened in the park, I can see that you truly love the park and I must say that you have very nice friends who helped you to clean your wound. It is good that you can mesmerize in the park with different activities you can participate in. I like your description of the time where you got injured. Most people would not write such unhappy events but I think this is very cool and unusual of you. However, I spotted some grammar mistakes. For example, you wrote 'I' as 'i'. however, in all, I find this a quality blog post. Keep up the good work.
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